Monday 23 May 2011

The Healing Touch

Silverfang's mind flashed to memories of the past. Being a rouge wasn't hard but it wasn't easy either. Unlike a Clan, you didn't have to feed anyone else but yourself. But when you grew old, no one was there to take care of your aching joints or tics. You had to deal with it. Yes. A Clan was much better. It provided safety and a home.

The gray tabby was waiting patiently for her apprentice at the camp entrance when she heard Blackpaw meowed, "Race you there!" Swiftpaw didn't have a chance to reply as Adderstrike came sprinting over almost colliding with her as she stepped by and meowed calmly, "Watch where your going." Toms. Does everything have to be a compition?

Soon Blackpaw and Swiftpaw ran over, Swiftpaw in a slight lead as he skidded to a halt at Silverfang's paws. "I win!" The black and white tom meowed.
"No! I did!" Blackpaw intervined. "You were behind me!"
"No," Swiftpaw countered.
But before the toms could get into an argument Adderstrike poked his head through the thorn barrier, he was panting, trying to catch his breath. "You coming?" The brown tabby asked.

"Yeah!" Swiftpaw meowed and raced out of the camp, closely followed by Blackpaw. Silverfang sprang after the toms.
Deeper they walked into the forest. Adderstrike in the lead, followed by Swiftpaw and Blackpaw, and Silverfang taking the back. She didn't know the territory as well as Adderstrike, therefore she let the immature tom lead.

Adderstrike suddenly stopped and scented the air, causing Swiftpaw running into him. "Oof! Watch where your going, Adderstrike!" The black and white tom complained.
"Sssh!" Adderstrike hissed, and covered Swiftpaw's mouth with his tail. "Cats."
Silverfang also scented the air. She could smell three different scents. Though it seemed one of them was going in a different direction. "Maybe it's a loner or kittypet just passing through." She suggested.
"Not on my territory!" Adderstrike hissed and crept forward. He flattened to the ground just enough that his belly fur barely brushed the forest floor.
Swiftpaw and Blackpaw crept up behind him, while Silverfang lingered at the back.
The brown tabby peered through the ferns, his brilliant green eyes narrowed into slits as he spotted a tom and a young she-cat walking towards the EmberClan camp.

Silverfang, seeing that the toms were occupied went to investigate the third scent.
She padded forward until the scent was strong. It was a tom. He didn't have any fear scent or anger and by the noise he was making it didn't seem as if he were trying to hide.
Silverfang stepped out from her hiding place and confronted the tom. His eyes widened, not with fear but with surprise. "EmberClan cat, right?" The brown tabby meowed.
"Yes. You are?" Silverfang challenged lightly.
"Brokenfeather. I'd like to talk to your leader-" Whatever he was going to say was cut short as Silverfang heard a screech and hissing.
"Come on, follow me!" She meowed and spun around, she didn't wait for the tom to reply.

"Get him, Adderstrike!" Swiftpaw encouraged as Silverfang burst through the bracken. She saw Adderstrike and the other tom struggling in a fight. Swiftpaw and Blackpaw were lashing out at the small she-cat. "Leave them be!" She shoved aside Swiftpaw who snarled in defiance.
Adderstrike broke away from the tom as Brokenfeather limped into the clearing. "What's going on?" He asked.
"Who's he?" Adderstrike hissed.
"A medicine cat." Brokenfeather awnered calmly, not afraid of the tom.
"And who are you?" Silverfang asked the tom and she-cat.
"Blackice, and this is my younger sister, Smallpaw. You won't hurt her will you?" He shot a glance at Adderstrike.
"Of course not," Silverfang meowed. "Let's try to get to camp without any arguments," and before anyone could say anything she turned around and guided the cats back to camp.
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When all seven cats reached the camp, Tanglestar was in camp sharing tounges with Thunderstrike and Nightwing. Blazepaw and Sweetpaw were playing with Sleetkit and Mistykit while Snowfall rested in the sun.
Her eyes flitted open as she called her kits over and hustled them into the nursery when she spotted Blackice and the new cats. Blazepaw and Sweetpaw's ears perked and the padded forward but were stopped by Thunderstrike.
"Who have we here?" Tanglestar asked as he got up and went to greet the cats.
"Blackice, and his younger sister Smallpaw," Silverfang awnsered before Adderstrike. "And Brokenfeather, who's trained in the ways of a medicine cat."
Tanglestar's eyes lit up. "Interesting." He than noticed the scratches on Smallpaw, Blackice, and Adderstrike. "What happend?" He demanded.
"This mouse-brain attacked us," Blackice meowed. "And these two apprentices ganged up on Smallpaw."
"Is this true?" Tanglestar's eyes blazed as Adderstrike reluctantly nodded. "Are you wanting to join EmberClan? Though I wouldn't blame you if you wouldn't anymore." Tanglestar added.
"Yes," Brokenfeather and Blackice meowed together.
"As soon as I am finished the ceremony I want you three to see Brokenfeather in the medicine cat's den. We didn't need anymore scratches after the fox attack but you proved this wrong.
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Tanglestar leaped onto the emberstone. "Let all cat's old enough to catch their own prey join beneath the emberstone for a clan meeting!" He yowled.
Snowfall poked her head out of the nursery as Sleetkit and Mistykit stumbled out, sitting near the entrance.
"I am honored to say that Brokenfeather will become EmberClan's first medicine cat. I put my trust in him as well as the trust of the rest of the clan."
"Also, I'd like to announce the arrival of Blackice, who'd ask to become my senior warrior. Knowing that I don't have a deputy I'd love to have him around. His younger sister, Smallpaw will remain as an apprentice, I'd like Thunderstrike to mentor her. Crescentpaw, since you don't yet have a mentor I want Blackice to mentor you. Blackice, Adderstrike, Smallpaw, go see Brokenfeather and ask him to treat your scratches. I don't want anymore fighting within the Clan.

That is all, Clan dismissed."

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  1. Silverfang padded up to the new cats, Swiftpaw by her side. "I'm sorry if I acted a little hostile before," she said.

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  2. "It's not your fault," Swiftpaw meowed to his mentor. "I shouldn't have got Blackpaw to help me attack Smallpaw. It's my fault."

    "And mine, but I thought they were intruders!" Adderstrike defended himself.

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  3. Silverfang sighed. "Well, I also took part in it, so it's also my fault," she said. "You can't deny that...."

    Blackpaw looked down, kneading his paws. "And I shouldn't have listened to Swiftpaw," he said.

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  4. Brokenfeather dipped his head, the sunlight thinly dappling his fur. "It's all fine." he reassured them, nodding in respect. Padding forward heavily on one side, he silently cursed at his twisted paw.

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  5. "Well if you want, you can make up to them by taking Blackice and his apprentice out," Tanglestar meowed.

    Swiftpaw looked at Smallpaw, "Sorry."

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  6. Brokenfeather padded to the entrance of the medicine cat den, his gaze searching through the cats of EmberClan. "All right, who's injured?" he called out.

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  7. Silverfang looked over at Swiftpaw. "Are you hurt?" she asked, worried about the apprentice.

    Blackpaw shook his head. "I'm fine!" he called to the medicine cat.

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  8. "Not from today's fight, but some from the fox attack. I'll be fine," Swiftpaw meowed.

    "I have a few scratches," Adderstrike meowed.

    Snowfall limped over to the medicine cat, her paw twisted from protecting the nursery fro mthe foxes.

    Sleetkit and Mistykit stumbled under their mother's paws. Curious as to wehere she wa sgoing.

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  9. Silverfang walked over to Adderstrike. "Are you OK?" she asked worriedly.

    Blackpaw bounded over to the kits. "Hi!" he greeted.

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  10. "I'm alright," Adderstrike meowed. "Tanglestar's disappointed in me, nothing new."

    "Hi," Sleetkit bounced away from his mother, Mistykit on his heels as he skidded to a halt at Blackpaw's paws.

    Mistykit watched the tom warily. He was new to the clan and she didn't trust strangers.

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  11. Brokenfeather limped to Adderstrike and flicked off Silverfang. The silver tabby let out a hiss before stalking off.

    "Just a few scratches could turn into an infection. Minor, maybe, but still an infection." he mewed, his ear twitching.

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  12. Blackpaw smiled at the kits. "I hope you grow up to be fine warriors!" he said.

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  13. "I'll be the fiercest warrior ever!" Sleetkit vowed while Mistykit crept up behind her brother and tackled him down.

    "Oh alright," Adderstrike meowed to the medicine cat.

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  14. Blackpaw grinned. "Of course," he said. "WIth you two in the forest no enemy stands a chance."

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  15. Amber{Sharpstone}26 May 2011 at 17:48

    (Is deputy open Alado??)

    Smallpaw looked over at Swiftpaw. Swiftpaw was taller than her, same with Blackpaw. "I-its alright," she meowed as nicely as she could. Her muzzle had few scratches, same with her chest.
    ~Smallpaw

    Blackice looked over his shoulder at Smallpaw before walking over to Brokenfeather. He showed him his shoulder, where some small clumps of fur were off. Adderstrike was strong.
    ~Blackice

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  16. (Chile was going to join and become deputy but that was a couple days ago)

    "You really think so?" Mistykit piped up.

    Swiftpaw looked at Smallpaw, "I'm really sorry."

    Sweetpaw bounded over, "Hi. I'm Sweetpaw," she introduced herself.

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  17. Darkpaw grinned. "I'm sure!" he said. "You just have to train the best you can as apprentices, and soon enough the whole clan will know about your skills!"

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  18. "What about your skills?" Sleetkit asked.

    Crescentpaw walked over to Sweetpaw and Smallpaw, Blazepaw right behind him.

    Snowfall looked at the medicine cat. "Is there anything for a twisted paw?" She held her right, front paw slightly above the gorund.

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  19. Darkpaw shrugged. "I don't know," he said, looking slightly ashamed. "I have yet to find out what my skills are, I haven't been an apprentice for long...."

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  20. (Don't you mean Blackpaw? Lol)

    "Right," Mistykit meowed.

    Sleetkit cocked his head, "Who's your mentor?"

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  21. Amber{Sharpstone}27 May 2011 at 13:20

    (Oh okay Alado. Maybe Blackice could be a Head Warrior, or stay Senior Warrior. Your pick!)

    "Hi Sweetpaw," Smallpaw meowed, remembering her name. She felt flustered being around so many cats. She was used to being around Blackice, and Blackice only.
    ~Smallpaw

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  22. (It really doesn't matter to me, Amber! Technically it's your pick, if you want Blackice to be head warrior I'd be more than happy to change it :D)

    "We heard you got in a little scrap with Swiftpaw. He's swift but not strong, your lucky you didn't come across one of the other apprentices," Sweetpaw laughed lightly. "But if he gets fiesty with you, tell us, we'd be more than happy to put him in his place."

    Blazepaw looked at his sister and twitched his whiskers with amusment.

    Crescentpaw nodded polietly to Smallpaw.

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  23. Amber{Sharpstone}28 May 2011 at 06:15

    (Gosh I don't care! This would be the first clan of your where I would be a high position{deputy;head warrior; medicine cat; etc.} so I guess you could move Blackice up to Head WArrior?)

    Smallpaw giggled. "Thanks, I'll let you all know when he gets fiesty with me!" All meant Sweetpaw, Blazepaw, and Crescentpaw. She noticed that Sweetpaw and Blazepaw looked a like. "You two are brother and sister?"
    ~Smallpaw

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  24. Brokenfeather grabbed a bundle of cobwebs, returning quickly to Adderstrike. Brokenfeather began to weave them around Adderstrike's shoulder, his twisted paw making it harder for him.

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  25. hahaha okay)

    Blazepaw nodded. "Yep, this furball right here is my sister." He chuckled and nudged her lightly.

    Sweetpaw lashed her tail, "I'm not a furball."

    Adderstrike watched him curiously. "What happened to your paw, if you don't mind me asking."

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  26. Brokenfeather sighed, finishing putting cobwebs on his shoulder. He limped back, turning to look at Adderstrike.

    "When I was a kit, I wandered off with my sister, Mint. We were playing around some rocks, when one fell on my paw, and crushed it. I've had this forsaken limp ever since." he mewed, showing his twisted paw fully.

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  27. "Does it ever hurt?" Adderstrike asked after listening to why his paw was twisted.

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  28. "At times, yes. The bone will never heal. It's cracked in half, only linking by one tiny strand of bone." he mewed, looking at his paw.

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  29. "That sounds horrible!" Adderstrike meowed and winced as his scratches stung.

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  30. Brokenfeather shrugged, pressing the cobwebs with his other paw.

    "It's not as painful as it sounds. Sometimes, though, I seriously wish my paw wasn't there. But I learn to deal with whatever StarClan throws in my way," he sighed.

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  31. Amber{Sharpstone}28 May 2011 at 15:36

    Smallpaw laughed. "Many say that Blackice and I look a lot alike! I'm like the same as him, just... smaller." She looked at her paws. Was this why she got her name?
    ~Smallpaw

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  32. "If your paw wasn't twisted, do you would still be a medicine cat or would you be serving your clan a different way?" Adderstrike asked curiously.

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  33. "Different way." he meowed quickly.

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