Saturday 11 June 2011

Rising Rage

Tanglestar surveyed his clan, everyone seemed to be getting along. Crescentpaw was befriending Smallpaw, Thunderstrike was getting acquainted with the soon-to-be apprentice, Mallowpaw, and the kits were playing a game Sleetkit had made up.
Tanglestar leaped onto the emberstone and summoned his clan for a meeting. "First off, I'd like to announce that Owlsight will become EmberClan's deputy." He remembered the brief description Brokenfeather had given him after receiving a sign from StarClan. An owl with obvious, amazing sight watching over the clan's camp, carefully and protectively. Owlsight was meant to be deputy.

There were cheers from the cats below the emberstone and Owlsight dipped his head gratefully.
"Also, I'd like Blackice to become my head warrior," Tanglestar smiled to the black and silver tabby who thanked him quietly. "As for Songstream, Copperflame and Mallowpaw, well Songstream and Copperflame,  we welcome you as a full warriors. Mallowpaw, you are yet still young to become a warrior, but you will train alongside the others. Your mentor will be Thunderstrike."
Thunderstrike touched noses with Mallowpaw.

"Owlsight, I'd like you to send out a patrol," Tanglestar meowed.
"Yes, when Songstream and I were on our way here we scented cats, they didn't smell of EmberClan. More so of crowfood than freshly killed prey."
Songstream nodded in agreement.
"Than take out a patrol immediately."
"Alright, I will take out," he looked at his clanmates for a brief moment before deciding. "Adderstrike, Copperflame, Crescentpaw, Smallpaw, Blackpaw, and I will go."
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The cats trekked along the EmberClan border, scenting for any alien scents. Suddenly a screech could be heard and without the need for thinking all six cats rushed to see what had made that noise.
When they burst into the clearing, what they saw horrified them all. A gang of rouges were fighting a small group of cats.
A black and white kit (Shadowkit) was hiding in the ferns, clearly scared, while the battle raged. Three queens were fighting side-by-side as their kits huddled close together. The black queen (Moonshimmer) was lashing out fiercely, while another black queen (Blackflower) was clawing at a strong tabby tom. The delicate-looking gray and white queen's (Lightfeather) eyes looked terrified but the lives of her kits were in danger.
Two small apprentices (Goldenpaw and Brackenpaw) were attacking a lithe gray she-cat as she clawed at them, obviously enjoying the "game" as she dodged their attacks. A well-muscled gray tabby tom (Stonestripe) was fighting alongside a pretty, slender, gray-white she-cat (Fernglade), and a stone coloured tom (Brackenfall) as they drove back five rouges, though the fire in the rouges eyes shown they would fight til their last breath.

One of the kits, a silver and white she-cat with blue-silver eyes (Wishkit) squeaked when she saw the patrol arrive, moved closer to a silver and white she-cat with yellow eyes (Featherkit), as a small gray and white she-kit with green eyes (Viperkit) glanced at the newcomers with fear and pressed to a black kit with white on her muzzle (Frostkit).
Distracted by the squeak the fluffy gray and black tabby she-cat was sent skidding across the battle clearing, almost pushing into a calico she-kit (Spottedkit).
Immediately the clan cats raced in to help.


(Continue role playing! I included everyone, and remember don't kill any rouges or harm them to severe, just drive a couple off and the rest will run off, they are important to the plot later on!)

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  1. Shadowkit just squeaked in terror, placing his tiny paws over his eyes to seal away the gore and violence.

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  2. Adderstrike lunged for the closest rouge and dug his claws in the cats side.

    Crescentpaw made his way to Shadowkit, "Are you alright?"

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  3. Shadowkit bared his fangs in defiance, his stump of a tail lashing. Showing fear was he last thing he wanted to do.

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  4. "Stop that, kit," Crescentpaw growled impatiently. "This isn't your fight, why did these rouges attack you? (you can make up something) Do you know who they are?"

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  5. Wishkit watched as fresh warriors poured into the clearing.
    "Look!" she squeaked, the sound of screeching cats all around them in the undergrowth.

    ~ฬเรђкเt~

    Stormfeather searched in vain for Tanglestar, hoping with all her heart he was safe.
    "Stormfeather!!!" came a loud caterwaul, catching her attention. The knot of fighting cats briefly separated to reveal Lightfeather under the paws of a massive black tabby tom. Hye had her pinned to the ground, claws extended at the gray queen's throat. Anger rose up in Stormfeather as she gave a shriek of outrage, lunging at the black rouge. Bowling him over, they tousled for a heartbeat before she had him pinned to the ground.
    "Don't you touch her or this Tribe. You hear?" she hissed in his ear venomously.

    ~ѕтσямfєαтнєя~

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  6. spottedkits eyes widend and then she was off she ran to the closest warrior,copperflame,"mama!mommy!"spottedkit shereked "help!"she looked up to copperflame"plez!"

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  7. blackflower looked at moonshimmer "i handel these pecics of crowfood go make shore all the kits are together in the ferns and ok"a black and ginger rouge heard blackflower and started walking over to the ferns."oh no you dont!" blackflower langed at the rouge only to pined down "get off me!"blackflower shecked.the rouge just smiled "this is fun i bet i can find the kit you were prteckting befor a kill it!"the rouge said "spottedkit!leave here now!!!" blackflower shecked blood pored from her leg.too weak to get up she sat there yelling for spottedkit to get out.

    ~blackflower

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  8. Shadowkit fluffed up his fur, his amber eyes blazing. "How should I know? Your not my mother, so stop yelling at me!" he hissed, his tiny claws unsheathing.

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  9. Viperkit backed all the way in to Frostkit and almost knocked her over. "Hey! Watch It!" Squeaked the tiny white and gray kit. "Sorrry..." Viperkit replied.
    After awhile, Her mother started losing to the cat she was fighting. "NOOO" Viperkit screeched at the top of her tiny lungs. She pounced on the back of the rogue and clawed as hard as she could.

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  10. Owlsight widened his already huge eyes at the sight. He growled and leaped in. He saw a kit attacking a warrior, and lunged over there. He grasped the kit in his scruff, set it down, and slashed he claws deep into the tom's back. He wailed in fury and pain, then raced away as he whimpered. Owlsight looked at the small kit."Get to the ferns." He motioned, and helped the queen stand up. He then whipped around to fight another rouge that was tormenting two apprentices.

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  11. spottedkit stayed right next to coppperflame


    this is my other account

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  12. Viperkit ran to the ferns, only obeying him because he was A)A warrior and she respected him, and B), That he was the deputy. Inside, she was screaming "NOOOOOOOOO!" But she knew that she couldn't do that or she would never be made a warrior, and that is what she wanted most in the world.

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  13. (Oh, Copperflame hasn't really been active...)

    Instead of arguing with the kit, Crescentpaw lunged down and snatched him up by the scruff. He than placed him down with the other kits.
    "Owlsight?" He called. "Should I take the queens and kits back to camp and get more warriors?"

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  14. Shadowkit bared his fangs. "Back off!" he hissed. Shadowkit leaped through Cresentpaw's front legs, running into the battle head first.

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  15. Crescentpaw sighed and darted off after the kit. "Your going to get yourself killed!"

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  16. Shadowkit didn't listen, only darted underneath the paws of the fighting cats.

    "Shut up already!" he snarled at him.

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  17. Crescentpaw leaped forward and bowled over the small kit. "Stop!" He snapped. "I'm going to take you back to EmberClan where you will be safe with the other kits." His patience was growing thin.

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  18. Shadowkit pawed Cresentpaw's nose, squirming out of his grasp.

    "I don't want to go! Your standing around here while mother's fighting your clan!" He indicated with his tail to the brown she-cat flashing forward, attacking a dark brown tabby.

    ((Don't worry; she'll die.))

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  19. "Would you rather get yourself killed?" Crescentpaw hissed. "Your mother will be just fine! You are the one who needs to go."

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  20. "She's attacking your cats, idiot! She's the leader! When she's done, she'll make you whimper for mercy!" Shadowkit hissed, his amber eyes glowing sadistically at Cresentpaw.

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  21. "I don't care, my clanmates are well able to handle themselves. The warrior code states that a kit should be help, no matter where they come from. Now get out of this battle and leave."

    Adderstrike who was fighting with a lithe black and gray tabby sent the she-cat running into the ferns.

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  22. "No! My mother will protect me." he growled stubbornly. Shadowkit bolted into the battle again, searching for his mothers brown coat.

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  23. (Don't kill her yet, you can be one of the main characters in the plots. The evil rouge leader! Lol, you can make her send the rouges back or whatever)

    Crescentpaw hissed and turned away, back towards the other kits to help them. He tried and that was all that mattered.

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  24. ((Sure.))

    Shadowkit buried his face into his mother's leg fur, tears leaking from his face.

    "Mommy, that meanie Crescentwhatever said you couldn't get these rouges to attack his clan!" Shadowkit sobbed.

    Azure immediately turned around, wipping her sons tears away with her tail. "Shadow, stay in the bushes while mommy takes care of these filthy clan cats. If anyone tries to get you, come to momma, OK?" she whispered urgently.

    Shadow nodded, before bolting into the ferns.

    ((His name is Shadow as a rouge.))

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  25. Adderstrike, watched as Azure and Shadowkit talked. She obviously was the leader. He lunged for her and swiped his long claws down her side. "Leave, EmberClan territory!" He snapped.

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  26. Azure let out a hiss. "Back off, dirtbag!" she snarled, leaping on top of Adderstrike and bitting his limbs.

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  27. Adderstrike struggled from the she-cat and went limp. A trick he had learned as a kit while playing with Tanglestar.

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  28. "Oh, I know that trick." she hissed, baring her fangs. Azure grabbed Adderstrike's scruff, before violently shaking his neck.

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  29. Adderstrike yowled and Crescentpaw ran over to help, he bowled over the she-cat and shoved her away from his clanmate.

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  30. Azure looked at Crescentpaw. "Aww, trying to be the hero? That only works in movies, kid," she laughed, before unsheathing her claws and smacking Crescentpaw.

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  31. (Technically, cats don't know what movies and kids are XD)

    Blood splattered from Crescentpaw's cheek, his eyes glowing with hatered.

    Adderstrike snarled and lashed at the she-cat, his anger growing rapidly.

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  32. ((Lol, but hey, rouges will be rouges.))

    "Hey, Psycho! Look at this little kit!" Azure pointed her tail to Crescentpaw while motioning for the gray tabby tom to come over.

    Psycho grinned. "He's getting all mad!" he laughed.

    ((I made up Psycho, if you don't mind.))

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  33. "EmberClan, retreat!" Adderstrike yowled and raced over to the queens and kits, "you may come to EmberClan." He knew it was Owlsight's job to call for the cats but his clanmates lives were in dange rand he wanted no more.

    Crescentpaw snarled but turned around to help those in need.

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  34. Shadow looked at Azure. "They're retreating, mommy!" he squeaked.

    Azure looked at the cats , but returned her gaze onto Shadow. "My precious, precious son, go with them." she meowed, licking his fur to groom it.

    "But mommy-"

    "You're going to spy on them, for me. Learn their ways and use it to our advantage. Go!" she meowed, pushing Shadow to the cats.

    Pretending to be sweet and innocent, Shadow faked tears and ran to Adderstrike. "I need a place to stay! My mother says I'm too weak for her, and I really want to join EmberClan!" he squeaked, pretending to be sad.

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  35. Adderstrike looked down at the small kit and his eyes softened. "I guess I could talk to Tanglestar," he meowed.

    Crescentpaw padded forward, his eyes tired and his cheek stinging as he made his way towards the camp.

    ~~~

    Tanglestar paced anxiously as Thunderstrike watched him.

    Mistykit and Sleetkit were playing in the clearing while Snowfall slept. Sweetpaw and Blazepaw watching over them.

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  36. Shadowkit leaped into the air. "Thanks!" he squeaked, running ahead.

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  37. Adderstrike appeared in the clearing, followed by Crescentpaw.

    Tanglestar raised his head, "Found the cats?" He asked impatiently.

    Adderstrike nodded, "The ones tresspassing? Yes? They were being attacked by rouges."

    Mistykit and Sleetkit perked their heads up, obviously curious at the sight of new cats.

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  38. Shadow just sat and pretended to be curious; but he was really taking in everything.

    The nursery would take some work to break down, but with Shadow inside, he could easily convince the other kits to do something to make it weaker.

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  39. Seeing the new kit, both Sleetkit and Mistykit bounded over. "Hi!" Sleetkit meowed.

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  40. Shadow smiled warmly to the new kits. "Hello! My names Shadow. What's yours?" he asked, his fur prickling as he saw the she-kit. She was kinda.... cute. 'No! Stay focused!' he screamed in his mind.

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  41. "I'm Mistykit," She smiled, her blue eyes sparkling, as she went on. "My brother is Sleetkit."

    Sleetkit nodded his head, his deep blue eyes curious.

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  42. (was owlsight helping blackflower up? XD lol i coundent tell)

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  43. Blackpaw looked at the kits with curious eyes. "Hello," he said quietly.

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  44. (I don't know, lol)

    Blazepaw padded over to Blackpaw, Sweetpaw right behind him. "I don't trust these cats," he muttered.

    Sleetkit laughed lightly.

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  45. What is going on i cant tell is moonshimmer blackflower and the rest of the cats in camp or what?

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  46. Shadow look to the apprentices, one of which said 'I don't trust these cats'. 'Good. You shouldn't.' Shadow thought.

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  47. Blackpaw narrowed his sharp red eyes and looked at Shadow. "Why not?" he asked. "They seem OK to me..."

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  48. (yeah)

    Blazepaw walked over, seeing that the kit was looking at him. "Hi," he meowed.

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  49. Shadow just blinked. "We're not bad cats, you know." he meowed, stalking off. 'Well..maybe the others aren't..'

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  50. Mistykit looked at Blazepaw. "What did you say?"

    Blazepaw shrugged and rolled his eyes. "That kit's moody."

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  51. ok thanks

    spottedkits mother blackflower padded though the camp she wanted to meat new cats "nice camp right spottedkit?" blackflower purred "yep mommy can i go play with the other kits now?" spottedkit asked "yes sweety"blackflower ansered
    spottedkit padded over to shawdowkit sleetkit and mistykit "hi im spottedekit!" she meowed.

    ~spotedkit and blackflower

    brackenpaw and goldenpaw walked over to blazepaw blackpaw,and smallpaw,goldenpaws eyes fished on smallpaw "hi he meowed brackenpaw rolled his eyes

    ~brackenpaw and goldenpaw

    umm squirrelkit wont be joining soo squirrelkit dosent exist and goldenpaw has a crush on smallpaw

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  52. A giant rock illuminated by the sun sat perched at the outskirts of the clan camp. Shadow slumped onto the side of the rock, his fur prickling with anger.

    "Azure, why can't you get me out of here...?" he mumbled.

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  53. Mistykit meowed a quick "Hi," to Spottedkit before going to see what was wrong with Shadowkit. "Are you alright?" She asked.

    Sleetkit waved his tail in greeting to Spottedkit. "Hello."

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  54. Shadow breathed. "I don't know...I'm just...tired." he lied, the words feeling t=like salt on his tongue.

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  55. "Well, I'm sure there's a nest for you in the nursery," Mistykit meowed.

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  56. spottedkit smilleled "do you guys like catching inchworms i do come on i know the perfict place for them!" spottedkit purred spottedkit lead sleetkit to the nusery and then to a clover patch "come on theres lots in here!" she meowed

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  57. spottedkit was suprized "inchworms are well littel worms that are green and they inch around"spottedkit explained"now come on!"

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  58. "Really?" he asked, brightening up.

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  59. "Worms?" Sleetkit stuck out his tounge in distaste.

    "Probably," Mistykit nodded.

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  60. "ohh come on look like this"spottedkit gets into a hunting crowch and jumps right on one see now you let it go

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  61. (Arggggg I just noticed my post for Lightfeather didn't work!!!>.<)

    I'm confused now?! are we still battliung lol

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  62. "Aren't they slimy?" Sleetkit asked, clearly interested and curious.

    (No, they're back at the camp)

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  63. Sleetkit sighed but followed anyways, but before he padded after Spottedkit, he shot one last, reluctant glance at Mistykit.

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  64. "you dont want to go do you?"spottedkit sighed "you dont have to you know..."spottedkit sighed again

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  65. "Know, I just don't want to leave my sister but it seems she'll be fine with Shadowkit." Sleetkit meowed.

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  66. "all right lets go."spottedkit lead sleetkit over to the patch of clovers

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  67. Sleetkit followed Spottedkit. He lifted his nose in the air smelling the musty scent of the clovers and dirt.

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  68. "here like this...you find one like oww this one! and then you ponce on it and then let it free you try."spottedkit meowed

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  69. ( Sorry i havent been active, i cant do more than one blog and i lost the link lol, lets just say i was in the forest )

    Copperflame burst into camp and saw the desrution, she saw some cats running out of camp. She walked over to Owlsight and asked " What in Starclan happened here?"

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  70. well i dont get what copperflame is doing there in camp and every thing is fine

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