Thursday, 21 July 2011

Revealed Secrets

[I am sooooo sorry! This is long over-due, but this post is utterly wait-worthy! So hang tight and comment on this post! :D
-Alado loves Rocky and Colt]


Snake was tired of waiting for his leader's son. He made his way through the brambles and thistles of the EmberClan territory and soon he was close enough to hear whispering. He froze. It was Shadow and some she-cats voice.
"What's going on?" Snake demanded, his fur fluffed up in hostility but the she-cat was already running back towards her camp.
Snake whirled on Shadowpaw. "How's that, Traitor?" He spat.
Shadowpaw leaped back, slightly startled. "She's no one. Just one of my fake clanmates," Shadowpaw meowed.
Snake shook his head. "C'mon, Azure is waiting for us."
"Wait! I have to get Hidden!" Shadow protested and ran through the bushes. He pushed through the bramble barrier and nearly crashed into Mistypaw who was talking quietly to her brother, Sleetpaw.
She casted one hurt-filled glance in Shadowpaw's direction before continuing her talking.
Shadowpaw simply ignored her, his mind going in a hundred directions but his heart going in only one. He didn't acknowledge it, instead he leaped over to Hiddenpaw, she was talking with Blazepaw.
"Hiddenpaw, we have to go. Now." Shadowpaw meowed and gave an uneasy glance towards Blazepaw.
"What do you mean-" Hiddenpaw meowed and was stopped when a sudden thought came to mind. "No...!" She meowed and walked away from Blazepaw, signaling to Shadowpaw to follow her.
"I won't do it," She said.
"What do you mean?" Shadowpaw hissed. "You're juts going to let us all down?"
Hiddenpaw sighed, "I know I came here to be a spy, but I've grown to like it here," She said giving a quick look at Blazepaw. "I can't just let the rouges destory my home."
"This is not your home!" Shadowpaw meowed in disbelief.
"It is, I've changed," Hiddenpaw meowed. "I'm not Hidden anymore. I'm Hiddenpaw, out of everyone, I thought that you'd be the one to understand..." She finished looking passed Shadowpaw.
He turned to see her staring at Mistypaw. "It's her loss, as well as yours," He meowed sharply and raced out of the EmberClan camp, nearly crashing into Snake who was looking for him. "Let's go," the brown tabby meowed gruffly and Shadowpaw nodded.
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"As soon as Snake gets back we will attack!" Azure meowed and the many rouges surrounding her cheered.
"Tonight is the night that EmberClan dies!" A well muscled stone-gray tom with green eyes called.
"Stone is right!" Replied Crimson.
The air was suddenly filled with the chorusing sound of the rouges.
"Let's feast!" Snake yowled as he entered the dirty area where the rouges stayed. Heads whipped in the dark tabby's direction and Azure's eyes narrowed to slits.
"Where's Shadow and Hidden?" She demanded and leaped down from her post.
Shadowpaw stepped from behind Snake. "Hidden decided to stay with EmberClan..."
"She's a traitor!"
"She must be killed!"
"Kill her!"
Cat's yowled in anger.
"Settle down!" Azure snapped. "Hidden will be killed for betraying us. But for now we must eat. As soon as we are done, EmberClan will pay."
Pay for what?! Red shot an uneasy glance at Jingo. He knew she shared his discomfort.
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"Attack!" A loud yowl awoke Tanglestar out of his den. His eyes were wide with terror.
"EmberClan is under attack!" A different yowl echoed throughout the clearing. It was Blackice's.
Tanglestar poked his head out of his den to see the silver and black tom being tackled by a rouge.
Warriors and apprentices raced out of the den sleepily, what they didn't expect to see was a huge wave of rouges flowing down from the ravine and crashing through the bramble barrier.
"EmberClan attack!" Tanglestar yowled and flung himself at a nearby rouge.
[Battle time! Remember, don't kill the cats listed on the 'Rouge Cat' list unless you have permission from myself, or the person who is playing that cat. You are allowed to make up your own rouge and drive/kill them off, because there are many, many, many rouges attacking the Clan. Hiddenpaw isn't bad, she prefers the life of a clan cat, Shadowpaw is just confused, and Mistypaw is hurt. Also, there will be a surprise for Red and Jingo, so don't kill them off!]

67 comments:

  1. OMG THE ROUGES ARE OUT TO KILL ME NOW!

    Hiddenpaw's usually narrow eyes were large, round, and innocent looking when she heard the battle cries. She knew she could probably defend herself, but not if they ganged up. She turned longingly to Blazepaw, then turned back and flung herself into battle with a terrifying screech.

    Owlsight burst out of the warriors den, immediately jumping onto a cats back and tearing its fur.

    Songstream looked around in panic, then settled herself and started fighting.

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  2. (LOL!)

    Blazepaw raced out of the apprentices den. He spotted Hiddenpaw's dappled coat fly into the crowd of cats and looked for his own sisters familiar ginger and white coat.

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  3. Blackflower stood in front of the nusery ready to kill any cat that trys to get in.

    Spottedkit stared into the camp;fighting and blood was as far as she could she was yelling."Come on get 'em so we can live!"she called as the other kits huddeled together.

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  4. Moonshimmer took the place beside Blackflower, instinctly defending the kits even though they weren't hers.

    Brackenfall let out a huge yowl as he drove off a silver rogue.

    Frostpaw was almost whimpering when she saw the amount of rogues against Emberclan. Oh, Starclan! She prayed. And joined the fight.

    Viperpaw leaped in the battle without a second thought and started helping Frostpaw Claw at Stone.

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  5. "thanks moonshimmer"blackflower meowed her eyes filled with rage that he rouges would attack

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  6. Copperflame saw Shawdowpaw fighting by one of the rouge cats. She leapt up and pinned to the ground growling. " I thought you were one of us, but I was wrong!" She scratched at his bellie and sped off towards another rouge.

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  7. Amber{Sharpstone}22 July 2011 at 07:57

    Blackice was thrown to the ground by a brightly ginger coloured rouge. Blackice bared his teeth and leaped back to his paws almost instantly. He upper-cutted at the bright ginger rouge's neck, and blood splattered out.
    ~Blackice & Dragon(rouge he is fighting)

    Smallcloud emerged from the warriors den, and unsheathed her claws. She lunged forward in long strides and tackled a black cat with light gray patches. She slashed at its back, her claws tearing down it.
    ~Smallcloud & Heather(rouge she is fighting)

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  8. (Kestrelpaw doesn't havea crush on Blazepaw anymore)

    Ivyflight flung herself into the meelee, scratching, clawing, and aiming to kill.
    ~Ivyflight

    Lunakit hid in the nursery, trembling. Suddenly, a rogue poked his head in and snatched her away. Lunakit yowled in fear as he ran out of camp with her dangling in his jaws.
    ~Lunakit

    Kestrelpaw was startled by the fighting cats, but quickly regained her bearings. She began to fight.
    ~Kestrelpaw

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  9. Owlsight finally found Copperflame and ran to fight beside her.

    Hiddenpaw growled, slashing at every rouge that came near her. She didn't care if she used to know and be friends with these cats, she was now in a clan and all of that was behind her. She saw Blazepaw and slowly fought her way over to him unnoticabely.

    Songstream looked aorund for Tanglestar."Tanglestar?" She called while keeping cats away from her.

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  10. spottedkit ran out of the nusery running after lunakit "Lunakit!"she called to her adoted littermate. "lunakit!"she called again
    ~Spottedkit

    blackflower eyes widen as she saw her kit run "Spottedkit! come back"blackflower knew she had to stay.
    ~blackflower

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  11. Copperflame saw Luna kit running outn of camp yelling Lunakit. Copperflame gasped, running after the kit. Then she saw the rouge was carryiing lunakit out of camp she easily outran Spottedkit, grabbing her scruff and carrying her with her. She caught up with the rouge. She clawed his nose and he dropped Lunakit.she put spotted kit on her back and picked up Lunakit taking them back to the nursery.

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  12. "but we can help!"spottedkit protested
    ~spottedkit
    "Thank you copperflame!"blackflower meowed
    ~blackflower

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  13. Owlsight purred at Copperflame."Well done." He licked her nose.

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  14. Copper flame nodded to Blackflower " any time" She licked Owlsights ear Purring too, just then a rouge jumped on Copperflame. She rolled and scratched his belly.jumping while he was in shock she landed on his back. He knocked her off, and she hit the edge of the nursery, her vision blurry.

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  15. Tanglestar narrowed his eyes. He had fought of the rouge he attacked and now he was searching. Searching for the cat that was leading the rouges.

    Mistypaw and Sleetpaw fought side-by-side. When Sleetpaw spotted Frostpaw he darted over to help, leaving Mistypaw vulnerable.

    Snake growled as he slashed at the clan cats. He to was searching for a cat in particular. When he spotted her he didn't stop but charge.
    "Well, well, well." He meowed, "looks like your left alone, unable to fight!" He spat and aimed a paw, letting it slice towards Mistypaw's flank.

    Adderstrike fought fiercly. He had the maturity of a kit but the bravery of a warrior. With satisfaction he felt his claws meet flesh.

    Nightwing and Thunderstrike fought side-by-side. Nightwing darting towards the rouge they were fighting, nipping at her paws. Thunderstrike swiped with claws unsheathed.

    Crescentmoon looked around for the familiar pelt of Smallcloud. He soon spotted his mate fighting with a she-cat. He was about to run over and help when he saw that she was doing fine.

    Snowfall instinctivly went to help guard the nursery.

    Swiftwind fought with a tom twice his size but three times as slow. He leaped around slashing and clawing whenever he could.

    Sweetpaw watched helplessly. Her brother was gone and she didn't know who to fight. Everyone was bigger than her.

    Jingo looked for Red, her ginger fur raised with fear. She didn't want to fight these cats.

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  16. "Copperflame are you all right!?!"spottedkit sheked her eyes wide

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  17. ((Alado, Shadowpaw isn't fighting, he's pacing around the forest, thinking, so can Mistypaw run from the battle and they face each other?))

    Azure flashed a toothy grin as she crept along the bracken. Everything was working. Tanglestar's stupid clan was going to die, with her at it's head.

    Shadowpaw paced bitterly around, his tail lashing. Though the yowls of cats in battle echoed in his ears, he continued. All he thought of was Mistypaw.

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  18. Red found Jingo and motioned for her to meet him at the outskirts of the camp, where the fighting was less.

    Frostpaw smiled at sleetpaw, not knowing he left his sister for her. Viperpaw nudged her sister towards the gray tom. "I'm going to leave you two love birds alone!" She yowled over the noise. Frostpaw blinked when she looked back while running away to fight another rogue.

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  19. (Stonestripe can die)

    Stonestripe was fighting on the outskirts of the camp, against two rogues, one big one skinny and fast. He was obviously outnumbered, so he ran to the forest and was chased by the two rogues. they raced on until they fineshed the loop and ended up in the thick of the battle and by then, he was tired, but there were two of them, so they could take turns. Stonestripe eventually slowed down and the big rogue made a shallow cut at his neck, and then made a bigger scrape so he was sure to die, just slowly, and in pain. He let out a few yowls, his breathing fading, but he was still alive, just barely.

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  20. (Okay Tawny and Eden)

    Mistypaw spotted Stonestripe being chased out of camp by two rouges, clearly bigger than her. She raced after them and followed by their scent. What she saw surprised her. The gray tabby was lying there, close to being dead. She scented the air, a well-known scent was nearby. Shadowpaw.

    Jingo ran over to her brother. "I can't do this," She whispered.

    Sleetpaw watched Viperpaw race away and looked at Frostpaw. "Are you okay?"

    (I think after this battle Blazepaw, Sweetpaw, Kestrelpaw, and Hiddenpaw will become warriors. Spottedkit, Wishkit, Lunakit, and Featherkit will become apprentices. Everyone okay with their cats advancing?)

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  21. (YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ovesly thats a 'yes')

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  22. (Of course!)

    "Thank you," Lunakit mewed to Copperflame.
    ~Lunakit

    Kestrelpaw slashed and ducked, hoping that she wouldn't get killed.
    ~Kestrelpaw

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  23. "lunakit!"spottedkit said a shoked look in her face "dont you want to help!"she meowed

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  24. (The cats that will be killed off or moved to the elder's den will be Brokenfeather, Stormfeather, Screechclaw, Brookrush, Larkflight, Lightfeather, Wishkit, Featherkit, and possibly Gingerpaw and Snaketail)

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  25. (the person who plays gingerpaw and snaketail is ative on other blogs...)

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  26. Lunakit took a deep breath. "What do you mean?" she asked uncertainly.
    ~Lunakit

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  27. "We could help fight with our clanmates we are close to being apprentice!"Spottedkit said her eyes widening with exitment."And if you don't go with me i'll go alone!"Spottedkit said lifting her nose high.

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  28. Lunakit flattened her ears. "I don't know...we haven't even had one battle training session. Please don't go," she mewed.
    ~Lunakit

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  29. "fine! only becuz your more mutar than me"Spotted kit growled waking into a coner hisss=ing under her breath

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  30. (Spyre, yeah I know, but she's not on this and I'm tired of asking people to be active >_<)

    Tanglestar looked around, who was the leader of this tyrant group?

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  31. Mallowfeather dodged a blow from a tortoiseshell she-cat, before scratching her flank. The she-cat ran, her tail-tip disappearing into the gorse. "Serves you right." she snorted.

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  32. "Good job," Thunderstrike congratulated Mallowfeather.

    Nightwing looked around for any of her clanmates that need help.

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  33. Lunapaw cautiously peeped out of the den, then quickly withdrew, glad that Spottedkit didn't go out into the fray. "We could play-fight," Lunakit offered, noticing Spottedkit's anger and resentment.
    ~Lunakit

    Kestrelpaw shrieked as a rouge sliced her flank. She darted forward, ignoring the pain of her wound, and sunk her claws into his back, sending him streaking away.
    ~Kestrelpaw

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  34. "in the middel of a battel!?!?no way the clan will think were not mutar and then they'll never let us become apprentices"spottedkit said her eyes raging with anger that she wasent and apprentice yet

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  35. Copperflame nodded to the two kits and the Tom swiped his paw trough her legs making her fall down. She screeched and tried to scratch him but couldn't see him. She got on her feet and looked around for the cat. He jumped up and landed on her back. Copperflame Got up on two legs and fell backwards landing on the cat squishing him. He ran away with his tail between his legs. Copperflame felt dizzy and she fell.

    Copperflame and bill the rouge

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  36. Mallowfeather flashed a warm smile. "Thanks," she meowed.

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  37. Owlsight ran quickly to Copperflame."Are you okay!?"

    Hiddenpaw slashed around furiously. It was somewhat hard, since most rouges were determined to kill her specifically. She saw Sweetpaw alone and scared, and had a slight change of heart. She pounded to her and slashed in the faces of any rouge near her."Do what I do." She whipped around to look at Sweetpaw.

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  38. Stonestripe coughed. (Can Nightwing come over there?)

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  39. (Sure)

    Nightwing spotted the gray tabby fur of Stonestripe. She bounded over, leaving Thunderstrike along with Mallowfeather. "Stonestripe?" She asked.

    "Okay," Sweetpaw meowed and leaped at Stonepaw, one of the rouges.

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  40. Hiddenpaw leaped up onto a rouges back, tearing away at his flesh.

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  41. Lunakit sighed. "Oh, okay," she mewed. She curled up in a small ball and tried to sleep while the raging sounds of battle went on outside.
    ~Lunakit

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  42. Spottedkit padded over to lunakit and lyed next to her "sorry fort being a jerk."she said

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  43. Lunakit smiled into her fur. "That's fine," she mewed. "I understand."
    ~Lunakit

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  44. Stonestripe sighed in relief. "Oohhh, Nightwing, It's you... I'm glad you'll be here...." He smiled weakly. "You're the first cat I would want to come....."

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  45. Copperflame nodded watching Bill run away. " Yah, im okay i think." She rubbed against Owlsight.

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  46. Owlsight purred."That's good, I wouldn't want to lose you." He smiled, then a bulky grey tom rammed into him.

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  47. Copperflame nodded and purred. " And i wouldnt want to lose you!" then a grey tom rammed into Owlsight knocking him over and Copperflame too. She got up and shook the dust out of her pelt. The grey tom was smirking like a mousebrained idiot. She lunged at the tom and jumped around lumping in his face and jumping out. He may have been big but he was slow and stupid. She started sratching and bitting his tain makeing him jump. Copperflame was getting tired.

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  48. Owlsight got up, coughing a bit, then jumped onto the tom. He hissed a threat his ear and slashed the tom's eye. He yowled furiously and ran out of camp.

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  49. Copperflame stood panting as the tom ran out of camp. She glanced over to the nursery door and saw the a tom trying to break in. She leapt over and scratched his nose and he ran off into the fray. She looked at the kits acting so brave. she smiled to herself hoping she would someday have kits.


    ( Red and Jingo should join the clan and become a medicine cat) TODAY I SAW A LLAMA INSIDE A CAR lol 030

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  50. (We need Tawny to comment! Lol and don't forget about the rouges you play if you play any!)

    Tanglestar was scanning the clearing. He had nine lives his clanmates had one, he wanted to help as much as he could.

    Nightwing looked at Stonestripe. "W-what do you mean?" She whispered.

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  51. Oh yeah.....

    Red nodded. "Neither can I! So what should we do now?" He asked, looking around.

    Stone slashed at Moonshimmer. "You and your clan will die today!" He growled, baring his teeth and circling her.
    "Oh yeah? Not if I can help it! She slid under his belly at the last minute just when he reared up to attack and clawed at the soft flesh and fur.

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  52. Jingo sighed. "I-I don't know," She said.

    Snake leaped at Blackice.

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  53. Owlsight ran after Copperflame to help her defend the nursery.

    Hiddenpaw slashed around, showing no mercy in her flaring blue eyes. She had too, since she knew they were out to kill her now. She caught sight of Azure slinking along the sides and ran to Tanglestar."Tanglestar!" She yelled to get his attention."Azure is hiding in the bushes. You need to be extremely clever when fighting her." She warned the leader.

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  54. "Who is Azure?" Tanglestar looked at the young apprentice suspiciously.

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  55. Hiddenpaw's eyes widened. She realized that he wouldn't know."I, I have heard a lot about her in my travels. She has to be leading these rouges, and is very hard to fight." Good thing I'm a great lier. She purred in her head.

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  56. Copperflame was zoning and then felt herself break throught the nersury wall she came back to the world and relized that a huge black tom pushed her throught the nursery she scratched him eyes and face.He flailed hih paws trying to hit someone in front of him. He hit Copperflames ear. She hissed at him. The deep wound was spewing out blood. She slide under him scratching his belli and bitting his tail. He ran out of camp screeching. She turned to see if she had fallen on any of the kits. Her ear still pounding and spewing bloood .

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  57. "Okay, thank you Hiddenpaw," Tanglestar praised the young she-cat and growled as he headed towards Azure.

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  58. Hiddenpaw purred and flicked her tail. She then whipped around and sped back into the fray.

    Owlsight went to Copperflame."Are you alright!?" He looked at her ear with concern.

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  59. Copperflame nodded, but there was blood in here yes and everything was red. Her ear was still bleeding. She rubbed her eyes with her paw and looked for Brokenfeather, but he was nowhere to be seen.
    (Maybe someone could just know a thing or 2 about herbs and become a medicine cat. ya now?)

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  60. (ya, because when our cats have kits trust me they will, one will be a medicine cat. plus theres a battle, how can u survive a battle without a med. cat.)

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  61. (I think Tawny was going to create a medicine cat but I haven't heard from her in days)

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  62. (That's a good idea but Jingo can't 'cause I play her and it wouldn't be fair since I play the leader as well)

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