Saturday 6 August 2011

Unexpected Surprises

Tanglestar had leaped at Azure and had entered himself into a ferocious tussle. He slashed, clawed, and even bit the rouge she-cat, trying to do everything he could to drive her as well as her followers.
Just than dark clouds that had been threatening the sky for several days covered the EmberClan clearing but none of the cats noticed, they were too busy defending their sides. Rouge and Clan cat.
Mistypaw was in the forest, she had been chased and was out of breath. She scented the air and her hackles raised when she smelled the strong scent of a cat very familiar. A cat that she didn't want to encounter now.
She looked to the sky to feel the first raindrop hit her cheek and slide off, almost like a teardrop. Soon the raindrop was followed by others.
The rain didn't follow lightly, it was drenching the whole forest, leaving nothing dry. Soon the clearing was filled with not only blood and cat fur but mud and rain water.
EmberClan cats continued fighting with the rouges. Trying their hardest to defend their territory.

Suddenly, a large crack could be heard. Tanglestar broke away from Azure and looked around wildly and not much after the crack rushing water could be heard. He instantly understood what he meant.
"EmberClan retreat! Head to the trees!" He yowled and quickly scaled a tree next to his den. The last of his clan mates climbed a tree as well as Jingo and Red, leaving the rouges yowling insults in the middle of the clearing. Soon enough water rushed into EmberClan's clearing, washing away everything, including the rouges.
"StarClan why have you destroyed my clan?" Tanglestar meowed quietly and watched the water rush by.

[Shadowpaw and Mistypaw are still in the forest, as far as everyone knows there life/death is unknown]

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  1. blackflower held spottedkit tite in her mouth this water reminded her of home

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  2. Silverfang raced with the rest of the clan to the trees, where she quickly climbed up the closest one to her and stood on it's lowest branch, which wasn't very high, but high enough.

    Blackheart, hearing the yowl of his leader, dashed to the towering trees and hauled himself up a tall tree, his claws digging through the wet bark. Once he got to a branch, he padded onto it and sat, waiting for further instructions from his leader.

    (I explained my absence in the cbox, hope you will forgive me, Alado :))

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  3. Amber{Sharpstone}6 August 2011 at 07:14

    Blackice lunged towards a tree, and started climbing. He went to one of the lower branches, and waited for what to do next.
    --Blackice

    "Crescentmoon! Crescentmoon!" she wailed as water surged up into her eyes. She couldn't find her mate anywhere! "Crescentmoon!" she called again before a strong wave of water pulled her underwater.
    --Smallcloud

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  4. Copperflame climbed a tree close to her and sat down she looked around at her home being swept away by the water. She wimpered slightly

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  5. Lunakit clawed her way desperately up a tree and flopped on a branch just above the water, shivering.
    ~Lunakit

    Ivyflight grabbed Lunakit and scaled the tree, perching beside Blackheart. "Oh, hi," she mewed to him.
    ~Ivyflight

    Kestrelpaw sat wide-eyed in the tree as the floodwaters destroyed the only permanent home she'd ever known.
    ~Kestrelpaw

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  6. Copperflame looked around and counted the cats missing. " Shawdowpaw, Mistypaw, Smallcloud and Cresentmoon. probly more." She thought She looked for Tanglestar and yelled across the cayos " Were missing cats, Im going to looked for them." She climbed the tree higher and looked through the forest. Then she heard " Crestentmoon!Crestentmoon!" over by the lake. She hoped along the trees until she found the lake. She looked down and saw Smallcloud struggling to swim yelling her mates name. "Smallcloud! grab my paw!" Copperflame yelled and lowered herself to the lowest branch and held out her paw.
    ~Copperflame

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  7. Amber{Sharpstone}6 August 2011 at 15:24

    Smallcloud opened her eyes and saw Copperflame's paw outstretched to her. Smallcloud kicked up and managed to grab Copperflame's paw.
    --Smallcloud

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  8. Tanglestar shook his head as he watched his home being swept away. "We can't just stay here and wait in the trees," He meowed more-so to himself.

    Crescentmoon had scrambled up to the closest tree and suddenly he heard his mates voice calling for him. "Smallcloud!" He yowled and searched the water desperatly and soon spotted Copperflame trying to help her.

    Adderstrike leaped up onto the tree beside his brother.

    Thunderstrike and Nightwing had scrambled onto a low hanging branch. They sat together, wide-eyed and scared. Suddenly a crack could be heard and the two looked at each other. "Climb higher!" Thunderstrike yowled and climbed onto the next branch but it was too late, the branch he had been on moments before dropped and he watched Nightwing's black pelt plunge into the ice cold water.

    Swiftwind had managed to climb up a tree in time.

    Blazepaw sat with Sweetpaw on a branch.

    Snowfall hadn't heard her leaders call and was swept away with the river.

    Sleetpaw yowled but no noise came out. He watched his mother be swept away. His fears suddenly greatened when he realized Mistypaw was no where to be seen.

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  9. (Smallcloud's not dead, Mistypaw and Shadowpaw are in the forest so nobody knows if there dead or alive but they're alive and Nightwing isn't dead, she was washed away, only Snowfall is. I had to kill of some of my cats because I play too many and Smallcloud and Crescentmoon are probably going to have kits so that means I'll have to play more cats)

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  10. Copperflame pulled Smallcloud up and asked "Are you okay?" Then she heard Cresentmoon and saw him safe in a tree. She hurried and looked for Mistypaw yelling her name. " Mistypaw!! If you can hear me GET IN THE CLOSEST TREE TO YOU!!" She looked around and jumped to the next tree but she ws looking for Mistypaw and aslipped falling into the water. She tried to swim but the water kept pulling her under. She yelled for help.

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  11. blackflower heared yelling then she saw copperflame she carfuly put spottedkit down "stay here."she meowed the ran though the trees and put out her paw to copperflame"Come on copperflame!"she yelled

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  12. Copperflame reached but the water kept pulling her under she finallly grabbed Blackflowers paw and she pulled her up. They ran back to the reest of the clan and Copperflame took a seat next to Spottedkit.She licked the kits ear playfully, like a big sister.

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  13. Amber{Sharpstone}8 August 2011 at 10:22

    Smallcloud thanked Copperflame quickly, but realized she fell. Smallcloud was going to help, but Blackflower was alreay there. Smallcloud leaped from tree to tree, until she was nose to nose, facing Crescentmoon. She purred.
    --Smallcloud

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  14. spottedkit purred to copperflame a littel giggle slid out of her mouth

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  15. Copperflame giggled too, trying to lighten up the mood but everyone else seemed sad. She sighed.

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  16. "whats wrong?"Spottedkit said cocking her head almost sliding off the branch but regained he blacne

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  17. Copperflame used her ninja refleces and caught the kit only to have her save herself.Copperflame Said " Well everyone else is so sad because camp got destroyed." Then a idea poped into her mind She wispered into Spottedkits ear " We should cheer everyone up" SHe smiled and started to plan

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  18. "but how?"spottedkit said cocking her head amost falling again

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  19. Crescentmoon nuzzled her. "I'm glad your okay," He meowed.

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  20. Copperflame thought awhile then picked some leaves of the tree. She aranged them and twisted there stems into spottedkits fur.She stepped back and looked at the leaf-mane she made for the kit, then she collected multi colored leaves and stuck them in her own fur. " Behold" she anounced " Lionpaw of Tree clan you have been trained by Rainbowleafstar of Treeclan me, And now you will become a warrior of Treeclan too, Lionpaw from this day until you die you will be known as Lionleaf." She ran over to anouther tree with flowers on it and picked a couple. She put one on Blackflowers head, tail and all for paws. contienuing ' You must be so proud, Blossumtree, to have such a great child. now where is lunakit she gotta play too" she looked around and spotted her sitting with Ivyflight. She looked at Blackflower/Blossumtree for permission.

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  21. Lunakit blinked and then padded forward, her little claws grasping the branch. "What're we doing?" she mewed, not waiting for the say-so from the older cats.
    ~Lunakit

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  22. " Treeclan, you can be, um..." She thought for a moment then continuied, putting leafs in Lunakits fur " Moonleaf! The medicine cat" She arranged some of the leafs on the kits flank in a cresent moon shape.

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  23. Owlsight sat by Copperflame, watching the rush of the river.

    Songstream stared with wide eyes. She was shivering and unknowingly leaned into Tanglestar."So many times..." She whispered.

    Hiddenpaw sat on a branch right above the water, alone. Suddenly, claws came out of the water and dug into her tail. She screeched in pain and clung to he bark.

    (Could it be Azure or something?)

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  24. Copperflame licked Owlsights cheek when he came over, and was about to ask if he wanted to play but stopped when she heard screaming She looked down and saw Hidenpaw clawing the bark. She rushed down and grabbed her scruff pulling her up, and a wet shivering rouge came up with it. She couldnt tell who it was, but she hissed and clawed its face
    (Probly not, Tawny hasnt been active so maybe it could be Bill my rouge or Snake. lol)

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  25. (LOL okay)

    Hiddenpaw looked at Copperflame with thanks, then attempted to kick the rouge clinging to her tail.

    Owlsight followed Copperflame, hissing at the rouge.

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  26. Spottedkit laughed she feelt so fliry (is that even a wrod?)"Roaw!Im lionleaf!"She hoped up and down

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  27. Fernglade pulled herself up in the tree. "Stonestripe is dead. Where's Nightwing?" She asked.

    Viperpaw pulled up next to her, Unaware of what Fernglade had just said. "Hey! What you guys doing?" Her face suddenly transformed when she realized something. "Where is my sister?"

    (Can Frostpaw be with Sleetpaw, Alado? Or is she with viperpaw?)

    Bramblefall and Moonecho scrambled up the tree together, Moonecho first and then Bramblefall.

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  28. (Chile: I don't play Azure, Tawny does
    Eden: Sure he can)

    Tanglestar had been daydreaming, he was snapped out of his thoughts by Songstream. "W-what?" He asked.

    "I-I lost her!" Thunderstrike meowed to Fernglade.

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  29. Songstream realized what she was doing and pulled away."Oh! I'm so sorry!" She stuttered, her face growing increasingly hot.

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  30. Tanglestar looked at Songstream and sighed. She was so pretty yet his mind was still jumbled. "It's alright," He said and looked at the rushing water running through the camp.

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  31. Songstream dipped her head and sat down, still a little tense from embarrassment

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  32. Copperflame hissed at the rouge and bit Her tail the cat reared up and Copperflame scrached her belly, the rouge fell backwords into the rushing water and they watched her flout away raising out of the water every now and then.

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  33. Hiddenpaw scrambled all the way onto the branch, licking the scratches on her tail."Thanks." She looked at Copperflame earnestly, then jumped onto the branch where Sweetpaw and Blazepaw were.

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  34. "Welcome" Copperflame dipped her head and leapped back up to where Spottedkit was bouncing widly roaring. Copperflame giggled and watched her. looking around again, she noticed Songstream and Tanglestar sitting together. Both imbaressed and shy she nudged Owlsight and nodded towards his sister.

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  35. Owlsight looked where Copperflame was nodding and laughed."Well whaddaya know? Songstream and Tanglestar." He purred."My sister is easily embarrassed."

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  36. Copperflame nodded and purred rubbing against Owlsight. She playfuly threw a leaf on his nose and proclaimed " Leafnose I now proclaim you as Treeclans Deputy!"

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  37. "Ya!Feafnose leafnose."Spottedkit chreeed

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  38. "Leafnose Leafnose!" Copperflame Cheered with Spottedkit.giggleing.

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  39. Spotted jumped at hit a leaf and almost fell of the branch

    (

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  40. -jade was sitting high up in a tree looking down on the camp tht she had only just met wishing she could have seen more of it then she saw some cats floating the water struggling to stay above it- *jumps doen some branches and lands beside Tanglestar* how many are missing, if there are any of our cats out there then WILL save them! i may not have been here long but they were still my clan mates. who... is... missing

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  41. "Oh.. Well she's a.... tough she cat....." Fernglade looked down at the branch and the black water swirling under it.

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  42. Copperflame laughted and said to Spottedkit " Now stop coking your head and jumping up your gonna fall" Then she laughted showing she wasnt angry.

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  43. Owlsight laughed with them, brushing the leaf off his nose. He purred at both of them playfully.

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  44. Tanglestar looked at Songstream than to Jade. "I don't know, I can barely see passed the water to the otherside," He meowed knowing some of his clanmates must have taken refuge there.

    Mistypaw was in the forest, she could hear the battle from where she was standing, opposite of Shadowpaw, but when she heard the yowling stop she froze. Something was wrong. Suddenly a huge wave washed over her and she felt herself being dragged through the forest, her small body hitting trees and foliage.

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  45. *before anyone else could say anything she jumped in the now river and paddled strongly downstream keeping her head above the water easily, she wasnt proud of her swimming skills because she learned them from a traitor but they could be very useful*

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  46. Copperflame purred too, rubbing against Owlsight. " Do you want kits of your own soon?"

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  47. Owlsight nodded."Yes. I've always wanted a kit named Eaglekit." He purred back at her.

    Songstream watched Jade."Wow, she's incredible." She murmured to Tanglestar.

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  48. Copperflame p=urred and replied " Iv allways wanted a Moonkit and Sunkit. If we get three you can have Eaglekit" Her wiskers twiching with ammusment.

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  49. *sees a head bobbing up and down, trying to stay afloat, paddels over to and recognizes it as a cat named Nightwing* Nightwing! *Nightwing was obviously getting weaker, grabbed scruff and swam strongly to the nearest treeand climbed up it the shakes pelt wondering if Nightwing is still alive* (is ok tht i helped her out of the water if not i can say she fell bak in the now river*

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  50. (eh thx gp for posting tht for me couldnt get it to work =P)

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  51. Owlsight nodded."Okay, sounds good." He leaned forward and licked her nose.

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  52. Thunderstrike leaped down and pulled up Nightwing by the scruff. "She's barely alive!" He meowed with worry.

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  53. Copperflame purred "Dont you understand it? IF we get 3"

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  54. *nods* we have to get the water out of her lungs can u handle tht? im gonna go see if anymore from our clan are alive

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  55. Nightwing coughed once and looked at Thunderstrike, her best friend. "Good-bye," She whispered and closed her eyes as she took her last breath.

    "Nightwing!" He yowled and nudged her but he knew that her breathing had stopped.

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  56. *herd Thunderstrikes yowl as jumped in the river and knew that Nightwing had moved on dipped head and whispered...* bye Nightwing, may ur prey be plentiful in StarClan, we shall miss u down here in EmberClan

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  57. Owltalon sat watching water race through their camp. He had his ears pricked to pick up conversations but he still didn't hear Nightclaw come up. "Owltalon, Moonpaw is missing."
    "What!?" he shouted jumping up. "We have to find her."
    "I know I know. Listen, you go into the forest but don't go too far. I'll ask around here and see if the other cats know where she is."
    Owltalon nodded then climbed through the branches calling for Moonpaw.
    Owltalon
    Deeper in the forest, Moonpaw clung to a branch. It was a wet branch and she was worried if she tried to climb she'd slip and fall into the water and she couldn't swim. *Someone will come*she thought. *They have to come and they'll help me.*

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  58. *Jade had looked everywhere finding no one out in the water she swam to the closest tree and nimbly leapt onto a high branch a shakes fur out* its as if all the missing cats were pushed to the bottom and sucked into the ground *leaps like a squirrel on bak to the others, lands beside Owltalon a couple trees away from the others* do u no if anyone else is missing? i cant find anyone else out in the river but i didnt no who to look for so i might have missed someone

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  59. "Moonpaw's missing." Owltalon panted. "I've been looking for her. But I'm not sure who else is."
    Owltalon

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  60. come on lets go find Moonpaw then *leaps down and into river with/o waiting for his reply

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  61. Owltalon watched Jade jump. He didn't want to endanger her while trying to find Moonpaw but it would be nice to have someone to look with. He jumped into the water and started swimming after her.
    Owltalon
    Nightclaw sat looking at what was once their camp. No one knew where Moonpaw was and Owltalon had gone to far into the forest for her to follow. *I feel so helpless, there has to be something for me to do.* Then she got an idea and started climbing through the trees carefull not to hit any other cats. Soon she was at the tree nearest to Tanglestar. "Tanglestar, what cats are still missing?" she asked.
    Nightclaw

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  62. *keeps ears pricked and eyes wide open looking for Moonpaw* "HELP!!!!!!!!!" *follows help cry* Owltalon, did u hear tht? i think she this way!

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  63. "Yeah, that's her alright!" Owtalon shouted back. He followed Jade as fast as he could.
    Owltalon

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  64. *paddles quicker and follows the help cries* MOONPAW, WE'RE COMING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! STAY WHERE U ARE WE'LL HELP YOU DONT WORRY!

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  65. Moonpaw heard Jade shout. She realaxed and felt herself slip on the branch. Quickely she tightended her grip on the branch but her paws were starting to hurt from holding on so long. "Hurry!" she called.
    Moonpaw

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  66. There! i see her! Moonpaw hold on! *paddles over and leaps onto the branch almost slipping off imediatly and grabs scruff* Owltalon push her up onto my branch if u can! *pulls up trying to get Moonpaw onto the branch safely*

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  67. Owltalon climbed onto the branch they were trying to get Moonpaw on. He grabbed her and toghether he and Jade got her up. "Thanks." she panted.
    Owtalon

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  68. spottedkit got annoyed and started pulling leafs out of her fur

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  69. lets get bak to the others *leaps like a squirrel bak to the others

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  70. What's the matter copper flame asked the kit

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  71. Owltalon and Moopaw followed Jade back to the others. (Where is Alado? I can't continue Nightclaw's part without an ansewr to her question.)
    Owltalon

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  72. "Mistypaw and Shadowpaw, and I think that's it," Tanglestar called.

    "He's a trader let him get swept away!" Adderstrike hissed.

    "Mistypaw too!" Blazepaw added.

    "Hey!" Sleetpaw growled and stalked across the branch towards Blazepaw.

    Sweetpaw interupted the toms. "If you attack Blazepaw, you will both fall into the river and there's no knowing who would come back up!"

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  73. "Nothing they just kinda hurt."spotttedkit meowed

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  74. *suddenly lands above the 'paws and Tanglestar* whats going on here? Im sorry but I thought that in clans you werent supposed to fight your clanmates, is that not so? cuz it seems as if that was about to happen
    (jade is trying to teach them to respect each other, even cats younger or the same age as them)

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  75. Amber{Sharpstone}26 August 2011 at 07:16

    Blackice emerged Blackflower and smiled. He licked her ear. "Hey!"
    --Blackice(They're mates, right?)

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  76. (ya they are)

    "Blackice!"She licked his nose

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  77. Amber{Sharpstone}26 August 2011 at 07:18

    Blackice purred. "I'm glad to see you!"
    --Blackice

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  78. idk chile


    "me too"blckflower meowed

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  79. "Leave me alone," Blazepaw snapped and leaped to a different branch.

    Sleetpaw glared after the older apprentice.

    Tanglestar sighed. Even in the greatest time of need, his own clanmates weren't even able to get along.

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  80. *narrows eyes* i thoought i said to stop fighting this is a time of need we neednt be fighting our own clan mates

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  81. Oh Copperflame nodded and licked her ear. She whispered in her ear Guess what? I'm expecting kits?"

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  82. im expecting kits, you'll have some more companions in the nursery!" copperflame purred

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  83. spottedkits eyes were wide "Really?!? Yes!!!"she meowed joyfuly

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  84. Owltalon smiled. It was nice to have some good news.
    Owltalon
    I'll find Mistypaw And Shadowpaw

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  85. (Nightclaw said that last part)

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  86. Nightclaw climbed through the trees of the forest hopping she wouldn't get lost too. She tried smelling for them but their scent had been washed away by the flood. "Mistypaw! Shadowpaw!"
    Nightclaw
    Moonpaw climbed through the trees near camp. Soon she found Brokenleaf. "Brokenleaf what should I do to help?" she asked.
    *I have to learn to swim later*she thought.
    Moonpaw

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  87. (Wow that was embarassing. I meant Brokenfeather but read the name too fast. O.k., i am never speaking of this again.)

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  88. Lunakit padded slowly away, knowing that their game was over. She sat huddled on a branch, watching the floodwaters roar by.
    ~Lunakit

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  89. (Brokenfeather is missing and I'm going to kill him off whenever I make a new post, I just don't know what to create a post about..)

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